Sentence Focus Workshop, Peer Critiques and Refinements!

 Announcements

• Don't forget to schedule SPAM 3 (see Tuesday's DP or the Senior Project page for instructions on that)
• Turn in SPAM 2! They are now late.
• Please complete peer critiques by the end of class tomorrow.

Sentence Focus Writing Workshop (aka Passive v. Active Voice)

1. Let's watch this totally awesome video on passive voice (it's funny, I swear!)
2. Let's admire the funny meme about passive voice (see above)
3. Let's practice!  Open the "Sentence Focus Writing Workshop" document linked above.

WORK TIME

• Peer Critique
• Finish/refine rough draft
  
• Conference with Ashley